I held her hand close to my heart
Tightly fearing i might loose her
I can see the gates opening up there
With someone calling me inside
I remember when i vowed infront of god
I will be there with her till death apart us
Thatmade me happy as i will there for her
But little i knew that vow can happen so fast
Today i leave her all alone in this world
To be be with my creator up there behind the gates
I closed my eyes and stepped into the place
With a feeling i can protect and love her from here
Tightly fearing i might loose her
I can see the gates opening up there
With someone calling me inside
I remember when i vowed infront of god
I will be there with her till death apart us
Thatmade me happy as i will there for her
But little i knew that vow can happen so fast
Today i leave her all alone in this world
To be be with my creator up there behind the gates
I closed my eyes and stepped into the place
With a feeling i can protect and love her from here
3 comments:
eda ee lokathu holding handsum..pinne telling "i love u' ennuma llathe enthokke karyankal undu..ivane okke aareda blog ezhuthan samathichathu....
very boring stuffs....
read a lot about love narrated much better than this..
I think the writer failed to impart the same feeling to the reader...
should improve a lot...
well i appriciate ur comment... actually i am also gettin bored in writing this...first few came out good.... maybe i ll start looking into othe areas of life
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